I did an extensive edit of Aurora, to what was there and adding the whole bit with the recent X-Men appearances.

I used what was there, and memory. I'm old so the latter might not be too good, if someone wants to fact check.

These are the notes I made as I worked:

age of thirteen in suicide attempt that revealed powers?
disappeared for a few days immediately following the suicide attempt?
accept guilt for all of her crimes, needs footnote 2007 X-Men Annual

my interpretation of the life of Jeanne-Marie up to her full-time status in the Flight is that Aurora was pretending to be Jeanne-Marie. She was living at the school when JP met her; he questioned why Jeanne-Marie and Aurora could not be the same as J-P and Northstar were, but he seemed unaware of the clinical MPD until the Jeanne-Marie personality surfaced during the first fight with the Master. The original article stated that she was switching between personalities.

Aurora and Walt hooked up in New York on a government-ordered mission against Machine Man, so the statement “After the team went independent of the government<sup>2</sup>, Aurora began a long-term relationship with team-mate [[Sasquatch I|Walter Langkowski (Sasquatch)]].” is inaccurate.

The relationship between Walt and Aurora was kept secret: Guardian was surprised to find that Walt was shagging Jeanne-Marie during the fight with the Master; Walt questioned what the rest of the Flight would think when Aurora unilaterally decided to move in.

The Marvel 2-in-1 fight...that was against the “Ravager”, right?

The original article indicated that Walt’s alteration of Aurora affected the MPD; my interpretation (as outlined in the edit) is that the MPD development was an influence on the alteration, not vice versa.

result of her irrational achluophobia (fear of the dark)....I took out the "irrational". The root of it being locked in a closet by nuns for an extended period of time makes it a very rational response to the perspective of Aurora’s survival. The same goes for Northstar “foolishly” falling for the belief he was an Asgardian Fairie...the stroyline WAS foolish, but I don’t know how foolish it was for NS to have believed it.

I did edit out many details in the post-Volume One text that indicated more activity of the team or individual members than it did Aurora. I felt this streamline the entry’s focus to Aurora.

In the MU, is it "Sabretooth" or Sabertooth"?

“Neither Northstar nor Langkowski had any clue as to Jeanne-Marie’s location, health or status from the time she had been abducted by Weapon X.”–Northstar was clearly in the dark when Sabretooth teased him about knowing where Aurora was. There is assumption that Walt searched off panel and was unable to find her despite having exhausted all leads.

There’s a touch of speculation about a connection between the Children and the twins. If there should be nothing that is not canon in the entries, it should probably be removed.